Create High-Converting Offers Effortlessly with Simplicity

Create High-Converting Offers Effortlessly with Simplicity

Create High-Converting Offers Effortlessly with Simplicity

Learn how to craft high-converting offers effortlessly by embracing simplicity. Discover the power of simple, yet compelling, offer pages and increase your sales with ease.
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Crafting Compelling Facebook Ads That Convert with Ease

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Simplicity is the key to a hot offer.

It’s easy to write ad copy for a hot offer. 

That’s because 90% of a high-converting ad comes before a single letter is typed.

  • Story Sells (So do these emails!)

In just 6 words, Bill hits the pain point, the promise, and the desired transformation.

If you run an online business writing emails that sell keeps you awake at night.

Problem solved.

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Revive your list and increase your sales

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I’m 50/50 on “better-than-tv” 

I’m sure he means people would prefer to read your emails than look at TV.

But the fact that I am asking the question is enough.

The rest of the copy is on the money, though.

“Unlimited Story Diven Emails At Your Fingertips

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Plan and write entire email sequences in the time it currently takes you to write just one email.”

Great use of simple visuals, and one of the cleanest heroes I’ve seen in a long time.

This format is definitely worth a test for your next offer page.

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How to Grow Your Course Audience Using Book Sales

How to Grow Your Course Audience With Book Sales

How to Grow Your Course Audience With Book Sales

Discover effective strategies for using book sales to expand and grow your course audience. Learn how to leverage book sales to attract more students to your course and increase your online influence.
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The Best Approach in Facebook Ads for Book Sales

When the elite marketers discuss the greatest direct response copywriters of all time there is one name that comes up every time – Brian Kurtz.

Brian ticks all the boxes. He has penned masterful campaigns that have generated billions in revenue for clients. Built an iconic publishing company to over $150 million. And, now teaches his timeless fundamentals to others spawning the next generation of direct response copywriters.

Many years ago Brian bought the rights to one of the most influential copywriting books from his mentor and friend Eugene Schwartz. Brian has incorporated this famous book intp a front end funnel for his copywriting course and mastermind.

Let’s dive in and take a look at two of the ads for the book funnel.

Ad Version 1 – Short Form

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Ad Version 2- Short Form

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3 Elements To Inspire Your Ad Campaigns:

  • Know Your Audience: These ads are targeted at a narrow segment of marketers. They are people who are at least aware of Breakthrough Advertising, Eugene Schwartz, the power of copywriting and another copywriting G.O.A.T. Gary Halbert. It is unquestionable that this narrow targeting makes these expensive ads to run so if you are adopting this strategy you better have a funnel that works and some high ticket items to seel on the back end.
  • Leverage Social Proof: Both ads make use of testimonials or quotes from reputable figures to establish credibility and trust. In Ad 1, it’s the claim that Breakthrough Advertising is one of the most important books ever written in its field. In Ad 2, it’s a quote from the late Gary Halbert, a renowned copywriter. To apply this technique to your own ads, consider including quotes or testimonials from experts, influencers, or satisfied customers that relate to your product or service.
  • Create a Sense of Urgency & Scarcity: We can break the CTA into 3 sections “Click the button below” “today” “and get it at the lowest price available”. Not a sylable is wasted. The first part tells people what to do. The section part tells them exactly when they should do it. The third part gives them a resons to do it. This creates a sense of both urgency and scarcity, which can motivate potential customers to take action. For your own ads, consider incorporating phrases that prompt immediate action, such as “limited time offer,” “act now,” or “before the promotion ends.”

3 Elements We’d Test:

  • Creative Mix: Both the ads feature video creative. Video is a phenomenal conversion booster but only when it has been refined and tested. Early in a campaign often images will produce a higher conversion rate. One way or another its always a good idea to have a mix of video and images. Different people respond favorably to different creative mediums.
  • Widen The Audience (a little): Very few marketers will spend $125 dollars (or $199 for the plus bundle) on a book. As a result the ads should appeal to a very select audience. If we were running the ads we would expand the appeal of the ads to a slightly wider audience. As the copy stands if you haven’t heard about Breakthrough Advertising, Eugene Schwartz or Gary Halbert the ad won’t resonate with you. This is a deliberate strategy. Potentially there are people willing to purchase the book outside this very knowledgeable audience. It is at least worth a test.
  • Include Transformation: If we were testing a broader audience it would be important to expand the copy and introduce an element of transformation. What will a copywriter experience once they understand and can apply what they have learned in Breakthrough Advertising? How have the lives of Brian’s previous customers changed once they implemented Breakthrough Advertising principles. If someone is “Your Solution Aware” you can be direct. If they are only “Problem Aware” or “Solution Aware” then you have to provide more evidence for them to elevate them through the stages.

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Lessons from Effective Sales Page Strategies

This is an absolute beast of a sales page. A true masterpiece of direct response copywriting. Do yourself a favor and flip through the page here.

Below is an extract featuring the above the fold section:

Sales Page – Above The Fold

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3 Elements To Inspire Your Sales Page:

  • Top Menu: Having a site wide menu on a sales or opt-in page is a big no no. But, when you have a long sales page with lots of sections it is smart to provide internal anchor links to key sections on the sales page. It makes it easy for potential buyers to find what they are looking for. 
  • Social Proof: The big claim (the most important book ever written….) is backed up by a simple testimonial from another big name Ramit Sethi. Brian goes counterintuitive with the testimonial copy. “Be warned: This is an extremely dense read…but beneath the verbiage are profound insights that have stood the test of time.”   Normally it is a negative to tell potential customers that what they are about to do is difficult. But considering Brian is targeting a very select group of elite marketers I think this is smart. He is appealing to people who value intellectual prowess. Triggering them to buy to prove they are more intelligent than Ramit.
  • Exit Intent Pop-Up Opt-in: Facebook doesn’t like sending their users to a page with an exit intent pop-up but Brian seems to be getting away with it. When you go to exit the page a pop-up displays offering you a free chapter from the book. If an exit intent pop-up doesn’t have a massive impact on your CPM or Campaign delivery then this is a smart strategy. If you were sufficiently interested enough to visit the sales page you are going to want a free chapter. This gives Brian an opportunity to get you into a dedicated sales email sequence.

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Supercharge Your Facebook Ads for Your Course Launch

Supercharge Your Facebook Ads for Your Course Launch

Supercharge Your Facebook Ads for Your Course Launch

Discover effective strategies to supercharge your Facebook ads for your course launch. From retargeting tactics to optimizing ad copy, learn how to maximize engagement, increase conversions, and drive sales for your online course.
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How to Optimize Retargeting Ads for Higher Conversions

Your Facebook ads shouldn’t stop when you close registration for your pre-launch workshop.

Nope, that’s the exact point they should kick into overdrive.

Today’s Facebook Ad examples are from an open cart Facebook ad campaign for Bonnie Christine’s, Immersion course 

This is a once a year launch for a $1,997 course. B

Bonnie has just wrapped up her pre-launch and has now entered that magical open cart period.

I have picked two ads to review today. 

Ad 1 is a sales page retargeting ad.

Ad 2 is a retargeting people who registered for or interacted with her pre-launch content

Let’s dive in….

Ad 1 

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Ad 2

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3 Elements To Inspire Your Ad Campaigns:

  • When using retargeting you are in control of who sees your ad based on the actions they have taken. Make the most of what you know about them. Make them feel like you are talking directly to them.
    Ad 1 opens with – “Cold feet about joining the Surface Design Immersion class of 2023? That’s okay, my pattern-loving friend. 💕”. If someone has checked out your sales page but has not purchased this is a great way to connect with them. To a cold audience this would be a horrible hook.

    Ad 2 opens with – “Hello, creative friend! Let’s keep the momentum flowing”. Again this would be a horrible opening hook to a cold audience but for someone who has experienced the excitement, energy and momentum of the pre-launch this is bound to capture their attention. 


Remember you can stack triggered events to tailor ads specifically for people who have visited all 3 pages of a pre-launch funnel or people who have visited just one. Again this gives you plenty of interesting messaging options.

Don’t be afraid to call out objections in your ad copy especially for bottom of funnel retargeting ads to drive sales. Take a look at Section 2 of Ad 1. People who are in the purchase consideration phase have lots of questions. In general most people have very similar questions. Bonnie calls out these objections – Time, Money, Self-Belief. In just one section she hits on 3 of the 5 primary objections to buying anything. (hit reply and I’ll tell you the other 2!)

Use testimonials in your ads. Having 50 brilliant testimonials on your sales page is useless unless people see them. Don’t just use testimonials to make the sale. Use testimonials to get people interested in visiting your sales page. Christine does this to great effect in the desire section of Ad 1.

3 Elements We’d Test:

  • Avoid vague and flowery language. A headline in Ad 1 reads – “🌿Building a brand that embodies their essence . . .” I have no idea what this means. It may be something that a client said once but it isn’t very concrete. You need to land the plane for people.
    …..Build a unique and profitable business

    Also try to avoid words that end with “ing”. “Build a brand” is a stronger than “Building a brand”.

     

  • Avoid telling people your course is transformative. Show them. We are told our programs should change people’s lives so everyone says their course or membership is transformative. Your customers don’t know what that means. Be specific about how their life will change. Otherwise you are just using fluffy filler words.

     

  • Testimonial Carousel. Across this campaign Bonnie has used video to great effect. I would also test image carousels. Create nice graphics of each testimonial. Stack the best 6 and create a testimonial carousel ad. After every second testimonial include a promo image for the program but include an arrow to tell viewers that there are more testimonials to come. 

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Sales Page Optimization: A Deep Dive into Design Strategies

Ok. So let’s dive into Bonnie’s sales page. In particular, I am going to focus on the lead section.

The phrase lead originates in the newspaper industry. It was the introductory paragraph or two that hooked readers into reading the rest of the article. It is normally 150 – 300 words in length, and it is a self-contained argument as to why someone should sign up for your offer. Someone should be able to make the decision to buy or not based on the lead.

The purpose of the rest of your sales page is to provide evidence to back up the argument in your lead.

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3 Elements To Inspire Your Sales Page:

  • The aesthetics are beautiful. There is lots of space. The design is simple but interesting. Most of all, it is warm and welcoming. There are some design elements out of the shot above (which you can see in the swipe file), but the simplicity of this page is a key part of its beauty. Don’t feel you need to cram lots of design features onto a sales page. Let the copy do the talking. The purpose of the design is not to get in the way.
  • I am a huge fan of positioning statements, especially when they are kept to 3. Bonnie introduces this in the “Whether you want to:” section This section should feature on every sales page. Split your perfect-fit clients into 3 categories and describe each one’s dream outcome. I especially love “Hello, curious creative”… “Hello, side hustle!”… “Hello, full-time designer” Naming your avatar categories makes it super powerful. 
  • Don’t be afraid to use language differently if it reflects your audience “​​BUILD AN ENTIRE BREATHTAKING CAREER FROM YOUR HOME.” The majority of people would have gone with “Build an entire breathtaking business from your home” As this is in such a prominent position, I am sure the word “career” is not random. It could be that Bonnie’s perfect-fit client is coming from a corporate background. It could be that for many of Bonnie’s audience, the thought of starting a business is scary, but building a career from home is less scary. Know your audience and use the language that will best resonate with them. 

3 Elements We’d Test:

  • There is a lot of dead space in the most important part of the page – the hero. No, I am a fan of space, but you have to use your highest-traffic areas to maximum effect. It isn’t about getting rid of space it is about getting the greatest return per pixel possible. I think the hero could move the sales process on better.
  • Make your hero about your audience’s outcome. Now I have mentioned this before, sometimes when a course or membership becomes so big and well-known, the rules that apply to mere mortals no longer apply. The hero is all about the course – Immersion. There is no mention of what it can do for the reader. It could be that this course is so well known it has become a benefit in its own right, but I would definitely test including the core premise and expected transformation as a short headline and subheadline.
  • Bring your creative dreams to life. This is a little vague for me. Sure, I can understand what it means but it is not painting a picture of what my life will be like with my creative dreams come true. Headlines like – “Build Your Profitable Design Career From Home Today”. “Your Profitable Home Career Starts Today” “Start Your Dream Design Career From Home Today” may add more weight. The biggest killer of strong headlines is casting a wide audience net. The wider your target audience, the less specific you can be.

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Successful Online Course Launch Strategy

Successful Online Course Launch Strategy

Successful Online Course Launch Strategy

Discover the secrets to a successful online course launch strategy. From building anticipation with quizzes to mastering Facebook ads, learn how to launch your online course with confidence and maximize your impact.
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Quiz Opt-in Page: Inside a Quiz to Launch Strategy

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The countdown is on to one of the big launches in the Online Course world. Amy Porterfield is limbering up for her Digial Course Academy Launch. What a great time to be a launch voyeur!

Closer to the launch, Amy will likely use a traditional pre-launch opt-in. But, for now, her list-building efforts are focused on her “Discover Your Ambition Archetype” quiz.

Archetype or Type is one of the 3 (and possibly most common) quiz types.

  • Type
  • Killer
  • Score

Amy has followed the Ask Method to the tee with this quiz and uses Bucket.io as her quiz builder.

Some key takeaways:

  • Immediately your eyes are drawn to “Free Quiz” across the top. As quizzes are still a relative novelty for front-end users, the combination of Free and Quiz is strong.
  • One of the strongest trigger lines on the page is “Discover Your Ambition Archetype” – Discover is one of my favorite opt-in page words. It builds curiosity and intrigue. Most entrepreneurs are “ambition” and competitive-focused, which will pique their interest. We love finding out how we fit into the world, which is why Archetypes are so powerful. 
  • Ready to get clear on exactly how you can make more cash, impact, and space to do what you love, your way? Amy touches directly on the 2 of the 3 freedoms here with Financial and Time. Impact is also closely related to the 3rd freedom, which is lifestyle. 
  • An interesting question to ask is do we really want impact for what it does for others or do we want “impact” for how it makes us feel about our own significance. (Could be a good one to journal on!) 

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Facebook Ad Optimization: Reviewing Effective Quiz Ads

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If you launch a Quiz you will need traffic at scale. 

Before I dive into one of Amy’s ads, jump over to the Facebook Ad Library and look at the scale of the campaign that Amy has launched.

Amy has 17 Ad variations running for her Quiz. Some of these ads appear 35 times across different campaigns and ad sets. 

There is a mix of medium and long-form ad copy centered around 2-3 key themes. 

These are matched with static and video creatives. 

If you study the copy and creative, you realize you don’t need lots of ideas. 

You just need 2-3 strong ideas and then iterate to produce many ad variations.

This is especially important if you are running a time condensed campaign for something like a launch where you have a large budget being spent over a relatively short period of time.

Some key takeaways:

  • Amy grabs attention with “New Quiz!” Emojis are a great way to catch people’s eyes in ads. 
  • Straight away Amy calls out her primary avatar, which is a corporate professional looking to start an online business. “allergic to a “typical” career path”. 
  • After grabbing their attention Amy connects with their fears and the internal nagging voice that exists within the head of her avatar. “Moving up in WHOSE world”
  • Then she moves into connecting with their dreams – “creating a business and life that aligns with your values”
  • She then links the outcome people want to the quiz.
  • Take a few minutes to answer this 7-question quiz and get to know which of the 4 Ambition Archetypes you are. Few minutes – 7-questions – 4 Ambition Archetypes. Gets specific, makes it feel quick, and makes it feel easy. Remember the value formula – Accentuate the primary promise, guarantee the outcome, reduce the time to attainment and reduce the effort required.
  • Study the fascination bullet points. In fact take 5 minutes now, grab a note pad and write these out. Often we feel compelled to tell people what they need to do or what they will get. Notice the way Amy creates real curiosity and teases the outcome without giving any real detail.

✅ How your natural strengths nudge you towards the business style you’ll be most successful at⁣

✅ One potential setback based on your archetype that might nip at your Achilles heel on the journey to business and lifestyle freedom 

✅ Other leaders, makers, and status-quo-shakers that share your archetype and prove that a business outside the status quo is not only possible, it’s worth getting uncomfortable for 

✅ What to do next to leverage all of the above, lean into your archetype, and take a flying leap towards the specific lifestyle you’re dreaming of⁣

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Launch Waitlist – Avatar Call out

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Well will you look at that… It’s an Amy Porterfield clean sweep…

I love following a launch from start to finish. So much happens before that first bit of pre-launch content is released. Here we see the waitlist for the Digital Course Academy page.

Amy has more detail than is commonly seen on a waitlist page. Remember that Amy has lots of launch reps and conversion data to work with. If you are starting out recommend keeping it simple.

One feature of the waitlist page that I want to focus on is the Avatar call out.

Every online business owner should have a well developed and accurate Avatar call out.

Most online businesses will have 3-4 specific segments within their target market. These are the people who will gain the most from working with you or which you help most frequently. 

The model Amy uses is simple but effective.

  • If you are a specific person
  • Who has this specific problem
  • And your dream is
  • Then this is for you 

Why not take 5 minutes for the following exercise:

  1. Identify the 3-4 key avatar segments within your business
  2. Idenitfy the biggest pain point for each segment
  3. Identify the common dream for each segment

Your online business is the answer to the question: 

  • How do you help each segment eliminate their biggest pain and make their dreams come true?

 

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