sales page optimization

Sales Page Optimization – How Not to Write a Dull Sales Page

Sales Page Optimization – How Not to Write a Dull Sales Page

sales page optimization

The gateway to unlocking unparalleled conversions and turning casual visitors into loyal customers is through sales page optimization. Brain Academy are using a simple (but challenging) Facebook ad > Mini-Product funnel.

For a $37 product this is not unheard of.

However, it puts a massive premium on the offer and your offer page copy.

You need to be elite-level to get this to work.

Unfortunately, like the previous steps, this offer page shows a lot of common mistakes infomarketers make. 

Sales Page Optimization Tip 1:

Don’t include general navigation on your sales page

This is a massive no-no.

The header section is a valuable space.

The #1 thing you need to include is a big buy now button.

You can include links, but make sure they are links to sections within the sales page.

Leading people away from the sales page back to the home page or about us page is a recipe for killing your conversion rates.

Sales Page Optimization Tip 2:

Don’t fluff the headline

$0.80 of your $1 is spent on your headline.

Brain Academy falls into the trap of talking about the vehicle rather than 

  1. i) the problem they solve or 
  2. ii) the ultimate promise they help people achieve.

I’m not going to repeat myself from the ad review section but despite telling people what the product does there is no away from or toward motivation imparted.

There is nothing for potential customers to get excited about and no reason for them to keep reading.

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Sales Page Optimization Tip 3:

Don’t have a weak (and buried) primary promise

Somewhere down the page we finally come to the primary promise.

But unfortunately, it’s as weak as a 3-second dipped tea bag.

“Take life back into their own hands”

People want to be inspired. They want to imagine themselves as the heroes of their own story.

They need specifics about what their life will be like once they are endowed with their new superpower. 

But they are lazy. They can’t imagine it for themselves. They need you to spell it out.

They need to know how much, by when, and how they can get a guaranteed result with as little work as possible.

This might sound like direct marketer speak, but it is true.

And your offer needs to be designed from the ground up so you can make these claims

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Sales Page Optimization Tip 4:

Don’t turn people off buying with dull module titles

If you don’t turn every module title into a curiosity-inducing, excitement-building, benefit-laden knock-out reason to buy, don’t list them on your sales page.

Unfortunately, this is a feature of teachable that I get all my clients to switch off immediately.

Seriously who is going to buy – “Scope of this course” or “neuroplasticity-sensorial-motoric-exercises”

No one wants to sit through hours of video. 

They want the greatest possible result, in the shortest possible time frame, with the least possible effort.

For titles to be inspiring they need to promise a big win.

That is what the person will be able to do when they have learned this skill or technique.

Implementing a robust sales page optimization strategy is not just about increasing conversions; it’s a dynamic process that involves understanding your audience, refining your messaging, and continually adapting to market trends. By prioritizing user experience, A/B testing, and data-driven insights, you can fine-tune your sales page to resonate with your target audience and maximize your business’s potential for sustained success.

Sales Page Swipe Files

 

Book-a-Call Sales Page

Optimizing the Book-a-Call Sales Page for Course Creators

Optimizing the Book-a-Call Sales Page for Course Creators

Book-a-Call Sales Page
Book-a-Call Sales Page

Making headline claims specific and tangible is one of the activities I spend a lot of time with my clients.

 

It’s a real struggle, especially with personal development offers to give people specific outcomes.

 

But it doesn’t mean you shouldn’t try.

 

I would love to see optimal health and peak performance defined.

 

The problem is OYNB can’t tell people they will double their profits or cut their marathon time by 35 minutes.

 

Sometimes this happens because people try to uplevel the problem they are solving and make  their deliverable broader.

 

It is easy to say – 

Quit Drink In 8 Weeks And Never Look Back

 

People don’t want to quit drinking, they want what’s possible when they quit drinking.

 

This is a never ending cycle, however, on the OYNB sales page the proposition is anchored in the second section where Complete Control is defined.

 

Perhaps even the words Complete Control could make the headline stronger as a unique mechanism.

 

“Discover the Complete Control Method to unlock optimal health and peak performance in your business, well-being and life in just 8 weeks.”

 

 Sales Page Swipe Files


 

offer page template

Offer page template for your next launch

Offer page template for your next launch

offer page template

Speaking of keeping things simple.

Here is an offer page hero template for your next launch. 

Introducing Your Complete A-Z {Your Topic} Roadmap

Get my proven, 5-step stress-busting system to {primary outcome} in just 30 days.

I love the phrase “5-step stress-busting” so much alliteration and consonance.

 Sales Page Swipe Files