Sales Page Review – Patty Parlmer Membership Offer Page

This is a Waitlist version of the offer page. 

 

What captured my attention on this offer page was the Success Path description.

 

Being a disciple of Stu McLaren, Patty was always going to have a strong success path.

 

But how she worked it into her offer page is sheer genius.

 

First we have the introduction:

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Memberships are a tough sell. You’re often asking people to sign up for an: 

  • undefined length of time
  • undefined amount of money
  • undefined outcome
  • undefined timeline to outcome

 

A success path brings specificity to what can otherwise be a very abstract offer.

 

Dream It – Plan It – Teach It – Grow It

 

Simple, but as a prospective member, I instantly know the path I will follow.

 

But then there is the real knockout punch:

 

Want to see the wins you’ll celebrate at each stage?

 

Many people struggle with making concrete promises for their membership.

 

Patty nails it in a very simple and easy to understand way:

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Do yourself a huge favor, download and study this offer page.

There is solid gold here in creating a clear, concise, and compelling offer for a membership.

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